It looks like the basic format and the story has all stayed the same. It is hard for me to find any real large changes so I think my main thing is that I stress coverage coverage coverage and that, like Adam said, you need to find what it is that is going to make this piece special. WHen I first read it I had this certain pace in my head that was pretty awesome and I think your script is going to turn out to be very visually interesting.
Yeah man your shot list looks good. I think you should be good to go with your shooting, since most of these are insert shots. Your heaviest day you have 35 shots I think that you should be able to punch those out as long as you stick to schedule. Goodluck man.
Hey Ryan,
ReplyDeleteGood shot list, having worked with you before I think it is something that you should have no problem completing in a timely fashion.
Not many changes to the script but you are closer still to getting that big moment of change and realization to Tyler.
Have you made a schedule yet?
Not much to say aside from it looks like you've planned things out well. When are you filming?
ReplyDeleteIt looks like the basic format and the story has all stayed the same. It is hard for me to find any real large changes so I think my main thing is that I stress coverage coverage coverage and that, like Adam said, you need to find what it is that is going to make this piece special. WHen I first read it I had this certain pace in my head that was pretty awesome and I think your script is going to turn out to be very visually interesting.
ReplyDeleteYeah man your shot list looks good. I think you should be good to go with your shooting, since most of these are insert shots. Your heaviest day you have 35 shots I think that you should be able to punch those out as long as you stick to schedule. Goodluck man.
ReplyDeleteLooks good, not really alot to say aside from way to make a shot list.
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